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Finally finished!
With a little progress bar at the bottom
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All these unfinished ones will be thrown into scraps.
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:icontokiohotel-meow12:
I don't use photoshop or anything so I wouldn't be a good critiquer. Sorry. But I love what you did, it looks awesome!

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You don't have to know photoshop or anything like it to critique an art piece .-.
But thanks.

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:icontokiohotel-meow12:
I wouldn't know the techniques or the difficulty of the picture, I have no knowledge of how it was created. Some ppl can attempt to critique but I'll sound like an idiot doing it....You're welcome!

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You don't critique on the difficulty of things.
You critique on how the final came out.

Like commeneting on how somehting works, or does not work, in the piece.

Not 'That technique is too easy, you should do something harder.'[even if it looks fantastic] nor 'That was really difficult, so it's awesome' [even tho it looks like shit]

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:icontokiohotel-meow12:
......

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I'm just saying, not trying to tell you off! Promise ^^;

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:icontokiohotel-meow12:
I know.

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:iconxrainbow-zebrax:
The blue eye looks more realistic, while the purple does not..

The hair kind of bugs me, since it's not all 'metallic' like the dreads.. Although I'm not quite sure how to fix that o.o

As for the skin- the blue/purple parts you added on.. What are they? They look like some sort of decay or something xD I suggest using a different mode on the layer for that, like multiply or something so it looks a bit more natural.. Right now, it kind of just looks like it's flat compared to the rest of the image.

( critique made with a beginner's knowledge on photoshop x3 )

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